That first kiss was surprising,
The moments that followed were
A comfortable silence followed
By a longing for more.
Swaying in the wind, wrapped
Up in the whims of out hearts,
Who would have known it would
Lead to where we sit now.
That first kiss more amazing
Than all the others, because
It's the one that started
This entire journey.
Who would have known that
An initial reaction to our
Position would bring is down
This most amazing path.
I am so happy that we
Took that first step;
Still so amazed by the results
Of that first kiss.
Author notes
As usual not what I started but still the same idea. Everything is always a little different from what we originally intend. Just like the first kiss with the woman I love.
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Comments
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This was a real pleasure to read
Well done and thankyou for your entry
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i love this!
Really charming piece.
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I love it.
This is really sweet. Beautiful!!! -
Beautiful....so powerful....I completely melted when I read this....superb!
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