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The crystal stream

A silent silver crystal stream
Preserved from time to be pristine
For never touched by human hand
A hidden peace of nature's land
A dotted array of sunlight stream's
In a world so nice its found in dreams
The water made by the break of rain
This river has its own domain
And never changing still the same
A picture perfect crystal stream.

Author notes

I dont usually write this stuff, but a contest I just entered a contest that inspired me to do somethign nature like.

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