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Two words to one death

Lost causes
Silent emotions
Strong words
Loves execution
Blind pain
Dieing hope
Freezing heart
Burning hate
Pleasing torture
Ugly breakdowns
Hidden frowns
Fake masks
Overwhelming loneliness
Sinking depression
Hard accusations
Many reasons

ONE DEATH
perfect tragedy

Author notes

Well i haven't been on AP for a while so here's a poem. It was inspired by a book i read. please constructive criticism, i haven't really been in a poem writing mood and plus i probably have permanent writers block :/

Please tell me what you think and i know its not grammatically correct, but i dont care

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  • lemonhead
    July 20
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    What book?

    BTW- GREAT JOB