Something that is obtained through time
Suppressing annoyance by ability
Joy learned from time waited
Once fast then slowed down
A precious gift delayed for a believer
Composure in its greatest form
Time heals all wounds
Patience for all things great
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A contest entry
- Fight for the Gold: Prewrites Unlimited #1 by amaranthine lover.
27500 points, ended August 28, 185 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
Comments
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This is too much of a definition rather than a poem.
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Personally I think this poem lacks cohesion, nothing ties any of it together, i think it could be reworked to make it a good poem. Thank you for entering the "Fight for the Gold contest, best of luck to you in the judging... Scott


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I don't know what you were trying to say.
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Very nice. great write keep up the good work.
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awesome piece... words so perfectly unified. creative and flowing beyond all others I have seen. perfect creation on something so many choose to avoid... just an awesome awesome write.


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This is really beautiful.


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I want to believe these words more then anything, great poem.


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