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Patience

Something that is obtained through time
Suppressing annoyance by ability
Joy learned from time waited
Once fast then slowed down
A precious gift delayed for a believer
Composure in its greatest form
Time heals all wounds
Patience for all things great

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  • This is too much of a definition rather than a poem.


  • Griswold gold member
    August 21

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    Personally I think this poem lacks cohesion, nothing ties any of it together, i think it could be reworked to make it a good poem. Thank you for entering the "Fight for the Gold contest, best of luck to you in the judging... Scott


  • Tqop
    August 6
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    I don't know what you were trying to say.


  • CherokeeSiren
    August 3
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    Very nice. great write keep up the good work.

  • thepoetx69
    July 23

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    awesome piece... words so perfectly unified. creative and flowing beyond all others I have seen. perfect creation on something so many choose to avoid... just an awesome awesome write.


  • Ashly
    July 16
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    This is really beautiful.


  • hisaddiction
    July 16
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    I want to believe these words more then anything, great poem.

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