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Like a Dream

It started off simple.
I only took two.
I stared at the bottle in my hand.
I poured the rest of them in my hand.
I swollowed them all.

I didn't feel pain until I woke up.
My sides acked.
I could feel my heart beat.
My breathing hurt.
"Knock Knock. Lindsey I'm home!"
Sydney  came in.
"Lindsey!"

It felt like the whole world was spinning.
It drifted side to side.
Maybe it was me.
"Goddamn, Lindsey!"
My grandparents drove me to the hospital.
My body was there.
My mind wasn't.

I woke up.
Again.
Everyone crying.
Doctors in front of me.
"Welcome back." They say.
Back?
To Hell?

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  • Mystery
    July 16

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    WEll I am glad u r back sis!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! do you know how fuckin upset i would of been if u were dead!! Amazing poem sis but plz don't let the story happen again, i want u to stay here not leave, not unless its by old age.


  • lostsouls12
    July 16
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    wow i am speechless. this is a very powerful write, continue you the amazin writing