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A road of beauty

Specs of light fall on ground
Through the trees from all around
A road of beauty quite reserved
And a trail of natures every curve
In turn the air is crystal clear
There is no sorrow, pain or fear
The force of hate is drained away
By the beauty of the day
Walking threw a forests path
All these things I fell and say.

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This is my first contest and I feel Its at least decent, so I'm happy.

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  • This is beautifully written. I like the way you pictures the picture I took. It is like I was back in Virginia. I enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest.

  • I agree! well done! good luck with the contest. keep that ink flowing. thank you for sharing. peace and light always in ALL ways, kp