No flashing lights
No rock
No jewels
No blinding ice
But I have a promise
One I can keep
I'll take your breath away
I'll sweep you off your feet
Take you far away
From the pain
From the rain
Only sun shinning days
Heaven is on earth
That's what they say
And Mine is next to you
Remembering every hug
Catching every kiss you blew
My days are no longer dark
My skies are always blue
So this is me giving thanks
It's all because of you..
Author notes
I intend on adding more to this one and hoping to shape it into a song of some sort....
What did you think
Comments
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For me!? <3
It's short and sweet! I like it! XD
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amazing as always. goodluck making it a song
that always makes it magicall-music
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beautiful! i like the short impactful lines that go one right after the other...it injects a certain energy into the poem that adds to its charm. thank you for sharing it. peace and light always in ALL ways, kp
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