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Thank You

Thank you for coming when I screamed out your name
Thank you for dragging me around in the dust and showing me the things I had wished away
Thank you for caring and being the man I wished you would be
Thank you for opening my eyes and helping me to see

Thanks for being there
Really, I thank you for showing me how much you care
Your feelings, they show right through...
And what a shame...what a mistake, how I felt, then, that I needed you

Thanks for your concern and your care
Thank you very much for being there
Thanks for the confidence, the light you gave to blot out my dark
Thank YOU for leaving me with a shattered dream and a broken heart



Thank you for everything...everything I have become...

Thank you...Thank you!

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  • what a heartfelt tribute to someone you care about. it is people like them that help the rest of us get through the dark times. thank YOU for sharing this. peace and light, kp