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I can't wait to feel you again

I can taste your gorgeous Italian lips on mine,
The heat from your breath taunting me,
Your body's driving me insane,
You know how badly I want you, in my eyes you can see

You push me up against the wall,
You know that's how I like it,
You bite my lip until it bleeds,
God you're such a perfect fit.

Slam me on the bed,
Still taunting, still teasing,
Slowly moving above me but not quite touching,
The slightest brush, so pleasing.

You ease inside of me,
So gentle, so slow,
We start to move together..
Then the intensity starts to grow.

 

As you thrust harder,

I cannot contain my screams,

Screams and moans of pure pleasure,

You fufill my wildest dreams.

 

I can't wait to feel you again....

 

 

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  • Nicely done...
    Maybe if there was a bit more "build up" to that final, intense, sensual moment?
    Still, pretty steamy
    Wishing you the very best in all your writing endeavors


  • ur gothic 1
    July 16
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    ugh


    beautiful <3