I love you like the sun,
Like a fresh baked bun,
That’s what makes you hun,
When I call you for some fun,
And you will have none,
Even though I know you love me a ton,
Because I see you don’t run,
When I say I want us to have a son,
A girl would be fine too I wouldn’t shun,
And after this poem you might come
At me with a gun,
Then I will be done,
With no more sun.
I can’t see any pun,
In the words I have spun,
Because I love you hun,
Until the sun is done having it’s fun,
And all the people just want to run with a gun,
After our son because he’s a zombie.
Author notes
I wrote this really quickly because I was frustrated with another more complex poem and I thought it was worth throwing on here.
What did you think, funny?
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I have to agree with Shari about the rhyming being a little forced however this is an enjoyable poem
I was not expecting the ending and found myself pleasantly surprised and giggling 
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This is different. the ending actually made me laugh. the rhyme is forced, but I think that it serves its purpose - if it allows you to write the other piece.
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