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Blind

My heart is crying tears of ice,
The chills are like gasoline,
And the firey passion of my will,
Explodes as my soul starts whispering...
I am lost in an octane rage,
Frustrated with be frustrated-
If I dare try I am denied,
And to quit is over-rated.
The blindness I have never ends,
As I am baited along by sounds,
And only when I hit a wall,
Are these demons found.
I am lost in awe at my reflection,
Cursing and convicting that evil-
But no matter my trials,
My pain is a simple retrival.
As I bleed all my ink away,
I am a student of my own art-
Although this life outshines a monet,
I am simply being torn apart.

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  • rips my soul apart, as usual! amazing, matt. i've missed your words.


  • spiritraven
    July 16

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    "my heart is crying tears of ice" Great take on the prompt. Good flow and lots of good imagery. Thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck