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Held

His scent beats against my chest,

dozing fingertips abreast
the nape whose lips
embrace me.



A contest entry

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  • piccola silver member
    July 26

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    this communicates a lot in very few words. Thank you for using the word limit and thank you for entering. I like the first line a lot.