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Tune of Whispers

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Sitting by the window pane
Guitar in hand, piano near by
Writing lyrics as they come to me
Like wind in my hair

A soft melody is formed
With breeze shaken chimes
Music comes into being
Sounds of nature play their roll

Suddenly, I'm singing to this beautiful tune
The Whispers of My Soul

Author notes

Prompt: Whispers of my Soul
photo credit: http://dreamerseven.deviantart.com/art/Into-the-Clear-128434854

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  • angeldreams
    August 7
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    And hey...
    The picture is amazing too.

  • angeldreams
    August 7

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    Wow.
    That was beautiful.

    'Writing lyrics as they come to me
    Like wind in my hair'
    Loved these lines.
    All the best for the contests and congrats for the bronze.
    -Swati

  • Great job on bronze!

  • I think you did a great job on the prompt! For prompts with me, I tend to take them too literally and always write exactly on them but you made it into your own story. That was really pretty.


  • spiritraven
    July 16

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    Very nice

    I love the smooth lilt to the write. Lots of good imagery. With only a few words you done the prompt justice. Thank you for entering my contest and best of luck

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