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Giving into Temptation

Hurt me
Break me
Oh please forsake me
Because it's ok
It's alright
I'm going to die tonight

Can't you see that I have been
Broken for so long
And that a few more cuts
Or broken bones
Wouldn't be able to further break
This broken heart

I'm too strong
But still I'm dieing
I'm not giving up
I'm just choosing
To give in to temptation

Don't cry for me
Don't shed a tear
Because we can make it
As if I have never been here


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  • ummmmmm your poems have been kinda concerning me lately this mean anything cuz its kinda making think somethings wrong although it is very good its stilll kinda ominous to me

  • i like lots :/

  • amazing. absolutely amazing. i like a lot =]

  • this is so very sad. your emotion really comes through loud and clear. I like it that you are able to express your pain in this way. sometimes our writing is all we have...thanks for sharing...i hope everything works out for you...

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