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Chocolate

C reamy or
H ot, it makes my mouth scream
O n and on
C hocolate, chocolate
O h, yum
L uscious chocolate, I can't believe I
A te it all. It
T ickles my throat
E ach time I eat it, mmm oh I love chocolate.

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Yeah, I love chocolate.

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  • songstress80
    November 16

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    yummy yum yum!!! i'm also a fool for chocolate and all its glory! haha!! i really enjoyed this acrostic. i like the way it was written. i enjoyed it so much i'm basically starving for something chocolatey right now. gotta have chocolate!

    great job on this write! keep up the good work!

  • Oooh! I love it too! And you made loving chocolate sound so sensual!


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 15

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    Chocolate, the treat of love.. no wonder so many love chocolate. and your words here I am sure can be felt by all of us that love chocolate.

    Riftkin

  • chocolate gives me migraines but im addicted so i get a lot of headaches lol well done clever jandi lol

    • Lol, You'd be more than addicted once you ate the chocolate i would give you.. lol

      • i always half atleast half a bar after reading you and i have chocolate too lol

  • (in the voice of Homer Simpson) mmmmmm....chocolate.....

    Very well done Jandi

    (note to self) don't ask where the chocolate is.

    • lmao At Homer. I could actually hear him right at that moment too.

      Well the chocolate is ......Did you actually think I was going to tell you? lmao

  • Indeed you wrote for me. Usually dipped in it but I will take it on the side as well
    Great job Jade.Butterfly

    Tory


  • SEA angel gold member
    July 15

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    That's really good...

    LOL... Chocolate and your Chocolate Acrostic. You look like an experience poet quite skilled and familiar with acrostics. Well done!!!

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