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Time For Me

You bring out the best in me

You with your definitions so symbolic and true

When your eyes settled in my direction,

Something in me grew,

I felt understood and as if a gift of compassion

In a delicate blue wrapping,

So reviting and thoughtful- was relaxed unto me

There was something for a second I knew.

I took it carefully, and still have not unwrapped it's case...

Now it is lonesome I fear,

Our estranging brains, our complicated desires

Have it left out in the cold

I feel all that is there is a question mark in dust...

But when my mind could tease the times,

When I felt ready babe,

What you could give made me feel

Like there was a light held upon me, so soft and sweet

That gave me oxygen to breath.

Without love, without friendship

I'd be nothing my friend

Without yours, I wouldn't feel this.

I require kisses, hugs, thoughts of faith

Especially when solitare is the only place

I know to move my feet.

Around you I shuffle then stumble on the ground,

Without you my feet don't dance.

And now babe,

It's no longer a question, but a lustful thought

I cannot have it

Until I see it's already there

With or without you

I'm here to WRITE!!! So judge, critique, embrace, please.:)

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  • You with your poetry,

    I felt understood with a gift of compassion.

    It was in a delicate blue wrapping

    So reviting and true--

    There was something for a beautiful hour, I knew.


    I take my gift carefully and do not unwrapp its case...

    I feel all that is there is a question mark in dust...

    And when my mind teases the time,

    All that is now, is a few grains of salt and a striking tick tock sound.


    Once upon a fairytale,

    There's been a light held upon me, so soft and sweet

    Giving me oxygen to breath.

    I can tell you this from the deepest of my heart

    About a different part, from the part

    That God-knows doesn't need receiving,

    Without love, without friendship

    I'd be nothing my friend...

    I require kisses, hugs, thoughts of faith.

    And now babe,

    It's no longer a question, but a lustful thought

    I cannot see it

    Until I believe it.