luminous orbit
parents reflective to child
two familiar stars
Author notes
Universe-
Traditional Haiku
5-7-5 syllables
My Zen Poetry
In a list
A contest entry
- Universal Haiku by twelfthknight.
800 points, ended July 16, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this takes nature and makes it personal and human. i don't see that often in haikus! but it is very interesting! great job!
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yes it does...and I also understand
there is no life here on earth without them
truly they are our parents
thanks sweets
for dropping in
mal
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Oh yes, I love this KU! You put a spin on it that is unique and refreshing!
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honestly it is a truth
we cannot survive without them
s for you doll
mal
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I love the parental element that you have put in this it is very creative, thank you so much for entering
x
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this is a true haiku
Zen
thanks for commenting
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Beautiful, Sentimental Artistry...
Best wishes in the contest!! 
Peace,
Cyn
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thank you cyn
Mal
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finally
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whoah
three clappies... let me catch my breath~
lol
still I cant cover your stars...there are none
by the way
finally?
ya is a whip girlie
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This has so much depth to it! So many perspectives... When I read this I think of the song: twinkle twinkle little stars... A song that reflect both childhood and parenthood... Very nice ... Good luck in the contest
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