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Faithfull Stalion!

All hail the faithful stallion!
Two wheels you have
Chipped white paint
A wicker basket
No suspension
And a wobbly seat!

All hail faithful stallion!
For when its late
And you have to get through Arbury
Very, very fast
Two wheels and a wobbly seat
Is the best you can do

All hail Kitty!
Owner of this nights transport
Safeguarding my safety with a bike
With a wicker basket
No suspension
And a wobbly seat.

Author notes

Its crap, its late, its supposed to be humorous.

What more can I say?

Oh, Arbury is as close as Cambridge (UK) can come to a dangerous area.

 

Oh, and it was written just after jumping off said stalion. Its a work in progress.

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  • haha cant relate to this at all but its really good and the repetitions quite good as well. i laughed at the last stanza it was really cute lol. great job=]