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Another tear

I have lost control
if i cry another tear
i don't know what would become of me.
I would be hospitalized
for cutting
and being suicidal.

They don't understand
what its like
they say they do
but they will never understand
because they aren't feeling
the pain and depression i feel.

If i cry another tear
i might go insane.
every little breakdown
it gets harder and harder
to cast away
all my problems
and start off new.









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  • lost.and.alone
    July 16

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    Great write, Love it!!

    "They don't understand
    what its like
    they say they do
    but they will never understand
    because they aren't feeling
    the pain and depression i feel."

    ^^^^This is true, VERY TRUE.
    well done, keep it up xx


  • xthe-ghost-of-you
    July 16

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    Really effective and personal. Some really good emotions here but try talking to someone if you get the feeling your going to breakdown, i've felt the same recently but found talking to someone really helps, good luck x

  • Bleedingsacrifice
    July 16
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    Great

    This sums a lot up