Stars fall from the sky
into a sparkling rose,
the garden glows now.
Author notes
This is my first haiku on here. I brought a book on different forms of poetry. It really came in handy today. hehe.
Picture acknowledgement: http://www.awakeinangelscape.com/images/glowingindigorose.jpg
A contest entry
- Universal Haiku by twelfthknight.
800 points, ended July 16, 18 entries
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How do you feel after reading this?
Comments
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Really good Haiku. I love Haiku's so much. I used to know how to write them but over the years I have forgotten how to write them sadly
. I love your poem though it makes me think of nice images in my head. I hope you do well in my contest and thanks for entering. Love and Peace!
-Jess
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Veri
Good sis its awesome write. I enjoyed reading it. Keep the ink flowing. U done a beautiful job and well written. makes me think of life
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Yes, that is a good haiku. Clear yet vague. Simple yet Complex. Its words are like moonlight through a river.
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Beautiful garden it is. You described it really good! Well done & keep penning!
Lana
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Its
Its a very nice haiku, can see the glittering garden
regards,
Mou -
I am so awful at reading let alone writing poems like this, but I made me feel warm inside!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-D
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This is wonderful with a picture set in your head at the end. Well thought out and a good poem
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Nice! Good job
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..much enjoyed
..yes, very nice one..
spiros -
beautiful. to see the stars falling and then making the rose glitter with them! really amazing and clear image. i love how well you wrote this. very well done!
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Congratulations on the Silver! That's great! I really liked the idea of the falling stars!
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congradulations on the silver
super fine ku, well done
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Very pretty. I enjoy watching falling stars. I think the Perseid Meteor shower is due soon. Congratulations on the silver cup. It was well earned.
Mike
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I find that most Haiku poems aren't very good. It's difficult to make them worth reading. When I read yours, I said, aloud, 'that's nice'.
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wow this is so beautiful, for your first hauku you did amazingly well!, thank you for entering my contest x
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