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Shhh..

The lean,
      toward your mouth,
            is such exquisite torture;

Part your lips to capture mine,
      don't waste such a beautiful move,
            on recycled words.

I've heard all those before,
     
but ...

I've not tasted you.
           

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  • Jonathan Norman
    July 26
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    sweet and vampiric

    "I've not tasted you" seems like a trap to me luv yo stuff


  • Legend silver member
    July 15

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    An excellent little piece Love the second stanza that is not to dismiss the rest of a wonderful poem
    Excellent