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cut my life into pieces

Ever wrong step i make is like cuting my own breathing.Everone is suffering me,im lousing my mind,i neaver rilsy that I was meant to be here .Do you even care if i die bleeding,I also neaver rilsy that i could fit in this world till it was to late.Im crying im crying im crying,im louse this life, cutting this life into pieces.Nothings allright nothing is fine.

what do you think about it and what did i do wrong and what do u think i mean

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  • BrokenAtBest
    August 17
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    I liked it. Did you kind of take parts from Last Resort? I love that song. I wish it was longer but it was pretty good.


  • WuzGood
    July 15

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    I dont see any hidden message here at all, please fix and put your hidden message in you author notes please. Thanks