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Sleepwalking.

I can't sleep
So I creep
'Round the halls
Of my dreams.

I'm so tired;
So full of the night.
I'm so tired,
But sleep won't bite.

I go to the
Bar at half-
Past-nine and
Stagger back.

I'm so tired;
I'm so uptight.
My eyes won't yield
To the night.

All my thoughts,
Late at night,
With knuckles tough,
Rap in spite.

So much noise.
So thick the air.
It presses down;
How I despair.

You're in my
Head and you
Thump the walls
Right on cue.

All my thoughts
Can't contain
The thought of you -
You rush through my brain.

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