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A silent touch

A silent touch I still regret
A weakened promise I'll never forget
The memory of our sweet duet
This bitter pain I can't forget
I trusted the look in her gray clear eyes
I fell for all her empty lies
I'm stronger now but still aloft
My head in the clouds
I'll trust anything soft
I was once a strong and peaceful dove
brought into a fray by the promise of love.

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Thanks for all the support I'm getting from everyone. Don't worry I'm better now but sad poetry is still my forte.

Do my poems let you feel my pain as well?

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  • BittersweetMercy
    July 15

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    Nice word choice,
    alot of rhymes, which is a good thing,
    cause the words all fit in a beautiful manner.
    Nice Work.