I'm alone all alone
I don't have even mother
Or anybody other
I don't have anybody to love
But i still wnna go above and above
I'm alone and alone
Alone all anlone...
I wanna cry
I can't fly
I'm so shy
But i never lie
But I'm alone and alone
Alone all alone
But who cares about me
Because i'm not a star like Miley
But i'm still havin a hope
that so far away there's some one for me
when i'll see her my eyes'll have a drop
But now i'm alone
Alone all alone
What did you think
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Very Expressive poem! I never knew you also wrote poetry!
Keep this up! I can see that you have a lot of potential in you and that's what you need to keep going.
Great use of repetition to create the atmosphere. You put a good amount of emotions in the poem. Again, Great Poem!
Send some of your poems to competitions.
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THanqq soo much and u'r poems are also too good
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A most expressive poem. I'm sorry if you're really feeling this way.
It's good you can put such emotion into this. Keep up the good work.
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Write more poems please! So, you like rhyme. I like your use of repetition to reinforce the feeling of alone-ness that you wish to express.
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