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Twilight Winds

Amongst the twilight winds,
as day recedes
and sunlight dims,
A single cloud
slowly melts away,   
spilling ice-cream colours
onto the cherry stained lips
of this sunset day

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  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    July 17

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    This is has some very interesting phrasing and is filled with color. Congratulations on your trophy. Well done. ~Pamela


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    July 17

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    Beautiful imagery indeed. Love it! Thank you for your entry
    Gaylene


  • KyleBerg gold member
    July 15

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    Beautiful imagery and flawless flow.
    A wonderful piece of writing.
    Best of luck