He came to her with love undying
Promised her he was not lying
Love enough for two betrothing
Then he treated her with loathing
Could they make a life together
Or would he be this way forever
Bitter memories abounding
Hateful words of wrath still sounding
If he cared he would not beat her
With such ire he would not treat her
She felt she needed something more
Than what there seemed to be in store
She needed warmth and understanding
Not the abuse that he was handing
Through the years her love depleted
All her hopes and dreams defeated
If she stayed could she endure
More of what had come before
So she left but felt no glory
All she felt was guilt and worry
Though she tried with all her might
To keep his memory out of sight
It did surround her like a curse
This raging guilt would not disperse
Would she ever be forgiven
Would her soul rise up to heaven
Or would she be cast down under
To the depths and cast asunder
But, maybe god would see her sorrow
And send her happiness the morrow
J Lloyd
Author notes
This is the first poem I ever wrote.
Comments
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Beutifully Sad
Once again Jenny, you make my mouth open with Awe, I could feel the pain, and remorse that was so thick one could cut it with a knife. God! I love the way you write, and the feeling you put into every piece. Hopeing to see you here soon so we can chat....Andy

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This made me cry..It brought memories back of someone I loved with all of my heart..and she didn't make it out of her sorrow.
Loved your rhyme and flow..Well written piece.




