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little birdie singing

life is too short for leaving
life is too short to stay
even inside the grieving
love is the life of day
no matter life's achieving
no matter work or play
without love's believing
life's love too turns to clay

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For those who leave, for those who stay ... I love you all.

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  • Topnotchsy
    August 21

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    Nice short write here with a lovely sentiment.. Definitely appropriate for the contest it was written for. Best of luck with it in the contest.


  • DogFish silver member
    July 25
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    charming little poem!


  • Heart Sutra
    July 21
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    This is a sweet poem Myra. We can always count on your beauty to shine through.


  • Jalalbad gold member
    July 16

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    Some good advice Myra. This has turned my deary morning into a happier day. Good luck in the contest pretty one.
    Much Love,
    Judy


  • onerios13
    July 15

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    without love's believing
    life's love too turns to clay

    Short and sweet and very touching. A delight to read.

  • Nicole Hanna
    July 15
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    This was very nice, and appreciated. The sentiment is obvious and honest. Thanks for droppin' by.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    July 15

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    Love this little poem that says so much of what I believe to be such truth, how life is to be that of love, so we are so much more than just the mold we are mended together with by bone. I love this write, and what a great way to start out my day!

    Much love, Timothy


  • Amera gold member
    July 15

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    This is adorable and a true pleasure to recite aloud. I needed this poem right now because I just found out that our own AP poet Melodies is leaving.

    Love,
    Amera♥

  • Bad Bill
    July 15
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    I like this, especially the rhyming scheme.

    Nice one,
    Bill


  • Cannonsfire
    July 15
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  • J Macabre gold member
    July 15
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    You always write such pretty things.


  • chilali
    July 15
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    Beautiful.

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