What pushes you towards an edge
That cannot be passed?
What pushes you towards such despair
That no one can repair?
Was it one act,
Or countless acts they never thought about?
Was it one person,
Who filled you with so much hate?
Do you know how much we will miss you,
Or do you think that we all hate you enough to be happy you are gone?
Did it occur to you how much it will hurt us,
Or do you think we will through a party?
Let me get this through your head.
I don’t know what you’re thinking.
I have questions too.
But life without you,
There are no questions there.
It wouldn’t be complete.
No matter what you think.
I would be stuck here,
Without you.
Thinking that it was I who was the failure.
And that I failed you.
I would think it was my fault.
And I wouldn’t be able to life with myself without you.
So please don’t go.
Don’t make me feel that way.
Because I love you.
And I need you.
And if you leave me.
I will never forgive you
Or myself.
what does it mean to you? how do you take it? How can i make it better? is there enough information? too much?
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I love this and it inspired me to write another poem which I will start soon. To answer you questions.
When I read this I thought about you telling someone who is thinking about suicide that there is people that still love them and you are one of them.
And this poem means a lot to me because I have had people in my life that attempted suicide and I always thought of a way to blame myself.
And there is a perfect amount of information I think you did an amazing job. Can't wait to read more. -
awsome write, really captures the emotion of losing someone close, especially like how as the poem progresses it becomes more personal, starting with 'we will miss you' and ending with 'and i need you', great write
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aww... this makes me sad.... but its a very emotional poem, i love it. A very nice write.
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this has great emotions flowing. you really speak the heart of a friend that cares. i will have to read it again. very well done
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good
it sounds like your telling someone who has tried to commit suicide this
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