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"She's Insane!"

Is it selfish to want to live again?
Is it absurd to want to be loved like before?
Crazy you say?
I don't think so...
They might all think I'm crazy...
'She's insane!'
But aren't the mental better off than the sane?

Wanting to live again is not selfish...it is normal...wanting to be loved by you is not absurd, nor crazy, nor unreasonable...it's not!!!
Maybe I am crazy...well then I can do and say whatever I want for the sole reason that I am insane...does that grant me pardon?
Is it acceptable then to want your love again?
I do hope so!

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