Interwoven flesh and bone...
Into this many bodes have been sewn...
All around, connected to bones of bloods stain...
This column wears the aura of pain...
Muscle tissue graphted with pulsing flesh...
Bleeding out in sections, tormented mesh...
At its base, viscera coated skulls gaze up in worship...
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great imagery in this piece you have penned
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Wow! This is amazing!
Nice to read a gorefest poem
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Have we been praying at the same alters? This is the bloody shrine that lies in the hearts of all men. Destruction is our birthright and here it is in yet anyother form. All we need is to set it on fire and toast our marshmellows. Great use of ryhme and meter.
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You really have me in awe with this one. Rhyme and flow is perfect as always. Grossness effect is high in the richter scale. You really are a master at this fine art.
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i want to throw up John wonderful work as usual my horror hero indeed in its shortness you have once again captured your horror fans attention making us grasp for air wondering how one could find such delight in all this blood!!!! wonderful title very catching!!!
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ewwww this is sooo gross, and i know that is definetly a compliment when i say that. thank you for this grisly poem xxx
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sweet flow dude, really like this
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Em
A poet of dark writes. Perhaps my favorite type. And the vision created is one of another kind of Frankenstien. Well done poet.
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One of your deeper horror writes
This was good in meaning, I loved all the stanzas and your artistic choice of words.
visuals were great as usual. Very talented indeed. There getting better every time. wonderful imagination and your flow is on point. Peace my friend.
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mm that is short sweet and tastyily to the point!
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I feel the words as plaster on this ravaged soul
after this message was well told as we see the graphics
here and feel the torment just given well penned my dear one as always Hugs Angel♥
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This just snakes out and grabs ya by the throat
Nice job
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LOL as always not much I can add...
it was one of those things that you can see happening... specially since graphting is gross!!! LOL
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this sounds almost like a scourging... graphic and gory... just what i'd expect to read when i come to your page
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Mmm...
Sickly simply, sweet, and grand...
In this it seems twisted, is your own special brand...
Well done. This was twisted in just so many words and just enough description. Fantastic.
~Sera
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deep,dark and twisted,you grab hold of the reader and make him beg for life,your muse must have been within your grasp after all,great writing as allways bro.
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My fave line has to be :
Muscle tissue graphted with pulsing flesh...
it was gripping and Grosssss lol
Loving the worship turn on the scene at the end of this poem - Great work J Mwah xxxxxxxxx
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graphic and twisted- loved it. You have a certain raw quality to your writing that i envy.... that and your a gore master. -T
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Enjoyed the images that flash in my mind, your rhyme here brought it to life.
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It may be different ...
yes. Different. Should you take another angle? Hmm? I wish.
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