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Broken Hearted Love

I heard someone say our special phrase today,
Still it made me sneeze.
To myself I thought all about you,
About how I feel
Like your broken hearted love.

I feel like the tear
That slipped from your eye
As you said good bye.

I feel so held back
Like I'm supposed to fail
Just another sad tale.

And it makes me cry
But only inside
Because my tears just won't fall down

I cried enough last month
I don't need that again
But I can't seem to help myself.

I'm your broken hearted love.
I'm your broken hearted love.
I try to smile for you,
I'm your broken hearted love.

I feel like the scars
Cut into your thigh
Just another high

Yet I fall so low
I know how you hate it
When I feel like spit

And it makes me cry
But only inside
Because my tears just won't fall down

I cried enough last month
I don't need that again
But I can't seem to help myself

I'm your broken hearted love.
I'm your broken hearted love.
The one who dreams of you,
I'm your broken hearted love.

I feel so ashamed
For feeling this way
But what about yesterday?

I tried to breath
Through all of the sobbing,
But I couldn't quit crying.

And it makes me cry
But only inside
Because my tears just won't fall down

I cried enough last month
I don't need that again
But I can't seem to help myself

I'm your broken hearted love.
I'm your broken hearted love.
I long to be with you,
I'm your broken hearted love.

Whispers: I'm your broken hearted love.

I hope you like it.

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  • KaylaAndPeace
    August 24

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    AWW...How sad...nicely written though..thats exactly how i felt when my best friend died...good job!!!


  • txchick
    July 30
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    AWESOME!!! I loved it.
    i mostly loved the emotion you showed.
    Great Job..


  • Daughter Of Night
    July 23

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    moonlight vampire

    aww i love this poem its very sad but has emotion that u feel from ur heart. love this poem.

    sincerly,
    angel


  • Calandra Jane
    July 15

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    Fantastic beginning, immediatly captured my attention (and I have a short attention span).
    And I love the last line, makes the poem come full circle beautifully.
    Amazing expression, amazing words and word flow. Love it.


  • Inakanu
    July 15
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    very good. i loved the flow of the poem and the emotion it shows

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