It seems to me,
There is something of beauty,
For it cleaves to every sheet and wall,
Sending the heart into free-fall.
Lying silently, the two engaged
Enthralled, amazed
And so it aught to be that way.
What did you think
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A sip of this
warms all the way
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Thanks
Kind thanks to you, deercatcher.
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For Sure,
It makes you all dreamy and foolish,
That's a nice promise you have there,
thanks for your kind words Yem.
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Yes, it ought to be that way, and I remember some instances when it was and I can foretell some more when it will be again...it's a promise to someone I know, somewhere.
A beautifully written wish/invocation...when it is really perfect, it does seem to cling, to imbue everything.
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Fitting title; this write was beautiful
Outstanding execution of brevity here.
It's good to see you writing again, my friend
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Thanks kyle,
That's a kind thing to say,
it's nice to be back again.
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I like this. something of beauty, kept between the parties involved, and yes, It aught to be that way.
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Thank You Friend,
Love is just wonderful when it's like this.
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