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Stripped n’ Dipped







Beats race in anticipation

awakening a zoo of chaos

Sensible reasoning becomes insane contemplation?

tossin' n’ turnin' in REM sleep 
dreaming about

"Hey, Hey, We're The Monkeys" 

as doubled tongued primate's
sip n' serve one glass
of wine n' dine at a time,

we fall prey to their sweet intoxication


addiction?
futility?
knowing another sandwich
made without peanut butter
is evident

sensibility reverts to sarcasm
like a chimp's attempt peeling the bunch,
only to find the "yellow-bellies" reroute; 
leaving an “over-riped” taste lingering...

why is it we can't do without
 potassium??

 

 

 

 

 

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Prompt: Naked Banana and Caramel Sauce
lol okay.... soooo.. tell me if you get it...

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  • Sonja
    July 28

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    Ha... it's obvious why you are a great poet when you can write something like this one. I am afraid that at this moment I will not be able to write on this prompt, lol... Congratulations for well deserved trophy.
    ~Sonja~


    • jasminerose
      July 31
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      Thank you so very much Sonja, it is always such a pleasure to hear from you!!
      ~~~~Many ssssss
      Linda

  • very unique and intreguing...I loved where you took the prompt



    • jasminerose
      July 23
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      Thank you Catie, I am so very honored you found this to be worthy of this beautiful award, thank you so much! ssss And thanks for holding such a great contest, I completely enjoyed myself writing this for ya!
      Linda

  • Oh this is unique and so very creative!
    I like it!
    I wish you the very best in this contest for it deserves the very best!
    Love ya muches!
    Sandy

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