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Addicted

It's true I'm addicted;
I'm addicted to you.
It's true I'm addicted;
To that screen shining blue.

To the sound that I hear,
That tells me you're near:
My tension relieves,
Like a cool summer's breeze.

For who needs some drugs,
When they're speaking to bugs?
Who needs to get SICK,
When a laugh does the trick?

It's true I'm addicted;
I'm addicted to you.
It's true I'm addicted;
When addictions are few.

I've tried all those others:
Tom, Crack, and Ice.
Found out Marijuana,
Is not very nice.

And that foul thing called beer,
(Or Aidan for short)
Cost a tear and a half,
For less than a quart!

And the list could go on...
I could write it all day;
On the hearts that have burned
And then smoked away.

But I'm done writing for them.
I quit each in the past.
Now I'm writing to say,
"I hope this one's the last!"

It's true I'm addicted;
I'm addicted to you.
It's true I'm addicted;
To all that you do.

The jokes and the words,
And - (Ooooh! Shiny bird!)
The sound of your voice,
And I'm left without choice.

Can't you see I'm addicted;
Addicted to you?
Can't you see I'm addicted,
Too late to quit you?

Now I've tried all the programs;
The patches and pills.
I've chewed so much gum,
Now my jaw simply kills!

I've tried quitting cold turkey,
Hot ham, and warm beef.
Compared to you they were easy,
Like lifting a leaf!

Now you know I'm addicted;
I'm addicted to you.
Could it be you're addicted,
Just as much to me too?

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A humorous poem...my third I think. lol.

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  • I side with Cheyenne (I think I know who dis is about too, but I thought the best way I could respond is with a semi poetic response of my own)

    Ill leave it up to you to find it

    BUT I love it!
    I give 3 mega super happy clap guys too! haha


    • Salig Flicka
      July 17

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      Lol...Everyone thinks they know everything...*rolls eyes* w/e.

      Glad you liked it!

      ~Moi

  • hehe I know who dis is about!!!


  • Naznomarn
    July 15
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    Very, very nicely done. I like!

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