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Thunderstorm

This is the story if a tragedy
life of pain and misery
born into a regret
left alone to lie
lie your way through life
and then the storms came

monsoon,monsoon
look through your tears
you've only been here half a year
this town of lost thoughts
you see a shadow approaching
and then the storms came

Me and you
sitting in a thunderstorm
confessed to die
i look in your eyes
i will never get the chance to say i love you
me and you
sitting in a thunderstorm
destined to die
look in my eyes
and say i'll miss you

This is the tale of a faliure
life on sorrow and silence
born into a remorse
find the truth behind the lies
find the truth i dont recognize
and then the storms came

rain,rain
take me away
take me to a different day
a day of love
a day if regret
i see a shadow standing there
and then the storms came

Me and you
sitting in a thunderstorm
confessed to die
i look in your eyes
i will never get the chance to say i love you
me and you
sitting in a thunderstorm
destined to die
look in my eyes
and say i'll miss you

dying,dying
i say goodbye
goodbye,goodbye
we're both dying
losing,losing
losing the feeling of being alive
take me to the afterlife

Me and you
sitting in a thunderstorm
confessed to die
i look in your eyes
i will never get the chance to say i love you
me and you
sitting in a thunderstorm
destined to die
look in my eyes
and say i'll miss you...

Author notes

this was a dream,a strange dream.its not about anyone,except the person in the dream,that person doesnt exist,of so i think...

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  • davey
    November 20
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    and im drowning in that same pain..

  • davey
    November 20
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    i feel the thunderstorm

  • Good

    Mhm, this has to be my new favorite one hun.
    I love it....
    xD RAWRR

  • wow that is a very good poem and for you to be only 14 just amazes me... I wouldn't expect quality like this from someone double your age! Well done!