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Breeze to Tease

We spent hours at the lake
my skin feels sun burnt
and my eyes are burning
I rubbed aloe vera all over myself
my hands are soft to the touch
I get compliments all the time
The mountain is so beautiful
with trees around the lake
He gave me a kiss
under the moon and stars
A spot light came on
we got caught
romantic kiss in the wind
110 degrees
and there is no pleasing
On this hot muggy one
a breeze to tease
at midnight


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Darlene Long
Option 7.
lake skin eyes hands soft kiss star moon spotlight time veins midnight electric

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