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The Desire (Fibonacci)

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My
Love
Darling
Let's do things
That are unspoken
Roll in the hay, moans escaping
Do me by that wall over there, I love it when you do
That thing you do, make my toes curl, make my world quake, make my body shake, make my voice scream

My
One
Only
Sweet lover
Making me shudder
Nothing could be better than this
Imprint on me, impress me, undress my soul, do me.

Oh
Wow
Gasm
Rocked me to my core
All of my energy taken
Thank you for the orgasm and the awesome head, wow
No-one has come close to making me twist and turn, they way that you have, thank you so much
.

Author notes

1,1,2,3,5,8,13,21.


I love this sequence.


wow...
writing an rough erotica, in the fibonacci sequence is one challenge i wasnt sure i was up for.
I hope you dont mind that it was in a form.. i thought it'd look much better

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  • YOU really nailed it on this one Dani... it was FUCKING BRILLIANT!!

    I love the layout, you have a way of making poems work!!!

  • I love that you wrote this in the fibonacci sequence! The nerd in me loves the scheme, the woman in me loves the subject matter
    nice write!

  • well done and so sultry
    wishing you the very best in this contest!!

  • Really incredible write! I loved it all..
    I definately enjoyed every word of your poem
    but I must ask...what is a fibonacci sequence? what are the rules of it?

    All the best
    xx AJAY xx


    • Andi. gold member
      July 16
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      thank you for the comment.
      A fibonacci sequence is what is above
      the rules go
      1,1,2,3,5,8,13,21
      you should try it, its mucho excellente'

  • As always...


    You rock my fucking socks!
    XD
    As Sara said, ''un
    spoken things are yummy'',
    given me the chance to imagine my own wants, cravings with those unspoken things
    I want you Dani
    Nice Job!
    And gooder Lucks!

    Lovers

    ESPD


    • Andi. gold member
      July 15
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      Thank you my sweet cheeked epic bestie

      Just know, I wrote this with you in mind

  • Bruce silver member
    July 15

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    Now this is unique! Bravo! I think we need a lot more of this kind of inventive experimentation! And poems are waiting to be written for lots of other sequences and series, not to mention the irrational numbers!


  • blueyez
    July 14
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    unspoken things are so yummy lovely write here dani

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