I think about you constantly, you drive my heart insane.
So complex a woman to break down yet it only drives my want.
I wonder thoughts of me and you and our happiness that could be.
Yet I am scared to have these thoughts in case it never happens.
I don’t know what hurts more, my desire for you or my fear of not having you.
My stomach is in knots yet I smile at the same time.
I’m jealous when you speak of other men no matter who they are.
You know my feelings for you yet you don’t ever tell me if you feel the same.
I guess that you might do but it’s a void there inside me asking if I’m right or wrong.
You never make the first move and I’m petrified to do the same.
I want to make you happy and treat you like no other .
I ask you where I stand you tell me that I’m halfway there.
Why is it that you like me if you really even do, your truly stunning and I’m ugly as fuck.
You asked me why I put up with you and my answer was because I really like you.
I feel like I’m falling and open to attack because when your around me I pay attention to nothing else.
Non of this will make sense to anyone else except me and even worse is the fact you will never read this ever.
To put it simply I have fallen in love with a girl who I don’t know too well and don’t understand, yet all of me wants you and needs you and fears you don’t feel for me.
Author notes
Something im really going through right now and basically penned right here on the spot after 2 sleepless nights.
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Ahh this reminds me how my best friend treated this poor guy. It really sucked watching it and I felt sorry for the dude. Plus I can relate to it. That happened to me once. I hated it so much. It was really good. I also enjoyed it. I hope you do well in my contest and thanks for entering too. Love and Peace!
-Jess
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Nice write. Keep up the good work.
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Interesting write and very nicely done. Thanks for entering and good luck!~
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This is a really raw piece that truly exposes your feelings for someone special. I love the honesty in it, with nothing hidden or held back, just pure emotion. Your nervousness is is appearant here but there is hope as well. These would have to be my favorite lines...
I dont know what hurts more, my desire for your or my fear of not having you
My stomach is in knots yet I smile at the same time.
So many peaple share the pain you describe here and smile through it all. I truly hope that everything works out for you and this girl. Just keep being honest and showing her how you feel. If it is meant to be, then it will happen. Best of luck in the contest and thank you for entering. -
Really good
I loved the line "You never make the first move and I’m petrified to do the same." well done les! xx
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