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Sweet Summer's Day

Sunshine sparkles on the water

as row boat glides by the stroke of the oar

Lily pads bobbing with long tails swimming

Lapping of waves against weathered wood

Brother and sister, tanned by the sun

A can of worms a hundred fold

Cane poles drop their delicate lines

As steadfast by our anchor holds

Silent and strong is our captain,

a man of many hard years

Soft of speech and gentle of touch

Guiding  little hands with care

Blue gills and golden bellies

Adorn our treasured catch

Spoons are tools in children’s hands,

While silver scales go flying

Crisp and brown on Grandma’s platter

Bones piled high by Grandpa’s plate

Sleepy heads now are bobbing

A summer’s day, now at end

Author notes

A tribute to my maternal grandfather.

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Childhood memories make wonderful poetry, don't you think?

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  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    October 30

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    I liked the "easy feel" to this poem
    Was Summer your Grandfather's favorite season? I just wondered since everything points to that
    Thank you for sharing your wonderful memories; and yes, I DO agree that childhood memories make wonderful poetry

  • catstar
    September 26

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    Wonderful! Great imagery. Superb atmosphere. I could close my eyes and imagine myself there. Truely amazing and very very beautiful. Fantastic! Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 16

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    A very good description of a perfect summer's day. Ahhh, and now it's coming to a close, yet again. I like your poetry about childhood memories much better than mine, though. Well done, Poet.


  • xBloodPromisedx
    September 1
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    I love the message in entails. Beautiful write. Good Luck.


  • cazzy71
    July 25
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    beautiful

    Beautiful.Simply beautiful.


  • penman gold member
    July 21
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    Wonderful

    aww, such great memories. Makes for a great poem. Thank you for time and talent.

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