A second,
A minute,
An hour...
Another day has passed.
All to soon another year is coming to an end,
a new door opening,
a new start may appear.
Yet it is still to soon to tell,
what will become,
what will happen
in this new year.
As the days pass by,
and your bithday approches,
remember ...
You may be a year older,
may be changing day to day...
Yet you are wiser in you heart,
mind, soul/
You have cried, smiled, hurt and shine,
but you made it through.
You over came it all,
and i am ever proud of you...
I just hope that you know how great you are,
Happy Birthday Brother,
Im here for you always..
Yous Sister
- Beautyful - x - Angel -
A contest entry
- STILL STANDING'S BIRTHDAY!!!!! by Still Standing.
2200 points, ended July 25, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
need feedback took me a while to finish this one.
Comments
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Very very touching
Your words and the emotions of this poem touched my heart!! It brought tears to my eyes. I love it so much. Thank you
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