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Highway Moon

 

 

 

“just drive”, he whispered
as he nuzzled my neck

“where?” ….


“to the stars and back”


I took his hand
as we climbed the stairs


“scenic route or highway?”


we knew the journey
would be at full speed
our only light … the moon

the ride would be fast and hot
the August night … relentless

the highway straight and true
no deviations …

our destination reached



“next time … you drive”,
I giggled as we kissed!

 

 

 

 

 

 

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"just drive"


Just thought I'd let you know, we've arrived!

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  • hawkeslake gold member
    October 13

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    This made me laugh out loud, and then giggle. What light-heartedness and joy! Fun to read, even better to imagine... Lita


    • Sue Cardwell gold member
      October 13
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      Like you, my imagination can be a lot of fun, especially if it's allowed to just wander
      Thanks for reading and commenting.

      Sue
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  • Judith Chandler
    August 30

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    That's lovely, romantic and funny. Congrats on the gold trophy.


  • JinSays gold member
    July 17

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    wow, what a lovely write Sue. I couldnt help but think I was in the backseat watching all this happen before me. Thank you so much for this entry, and Im wishing you all the best.
    Love,
    jin

    • Sue Cardwell gold member
      July 17
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      Many thanks for the gold and the comment Jin, as always, your contests are fun to write for and this was no exception
      Have a great break and I would say "behave yourself", but where's the fun in that
      See you when you get back.

      Love,
      Sue


  • Legend silver member
    July 15

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    What no deviations? blast.
    This wicked, dirty mind of mine can always manage to read more into a poem than
    perhaps the writer intended Not to worry it makes (for me) a far more exciting read
    Excellent


    • Sue Cardwell gold member
      July 15
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      Many thanks Richard, and you know the way my mind works as well

      Sue
      x


  • ceegeeess
    July 14

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    ive safe and steady!

    Drive safe, be it scenic or highway drive!A trip to moon is honeymoon and sip honey while you drive to moon aand be back in the bliss of love.Love drive is the best drive, sweet Sue!


  • arafura gold member
    July 14
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    What a trip! lol!

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