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CENTOOOOOOO!!!! .o.

Gone
Fragile Heart
Done BeingAChild
Stranger
My Death
American Soldier
The night that never happened

A contest entry

i think i did bad... T.T

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • J. M. Spenser
    July 14
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    This was ok... didn't make much sense... but that doesn't really matter. It's the effort that's what means so much. And i guess it is kinda hard choosing from only 22 poems. haha. But you did well. Just because I can you will go to the next round and from there I am sure it will be... probably more confusing and less sense then this BUT again it's all in the fun.