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Something about you

Ey empress, just thought i'd let you know
i love ya smile
and i luv ya mind too
your the definition of a woman
one that keeps it real and true
your skin is brown n smooth
just like bronze
your laying next to me boo
your pure African hair rests on my arms
I just wanna stay next to you
u r G-O-L-D ,,, Giving Only Love n Devotion
You know my thoughts, you've seen my emotions
and i, can describe every inch of ya body
the perfect structure
a good heart
purer like nature, you were here with me from the start
and lastly,
i can still remember the first day you walked right past me
I had to blink twice, wipe my eyes n my glasses.......

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  • LyricalFl0w
    July 19
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    tthnx very much fa da feedback.... i changed it now...

  • I really like this chuck, nice write although I am not keen on the red writing on a coffe background, kinda makes it harder to read. Apart from that really good.