pretty bride
dressed in white
handsome groom
tired of life
standing together
those fateful words...
"i...
...
...
...
...
...don't"
she runs faster and faster
running out of the church
leaving him behind in tears
standing uncertain
of a future now empty
without her by his side
she stops
leaning against a tree
trying
to
catch
her
breath
as
it
resumed
running
after
her
she waits
trying to find out
if he really did follow her
like he promised her he would
he didn't
he lied to her
repeatedly...
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This reminds me of the movie, "Runaway Bride" with Richard Greer and Julia Roberts.
What agreat read! You really took this to a whole new level! Fantastic!!
and love
Mom
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"lock the doors! she's gonna run!"
thanks mom ^^
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wow that was a strong write.
hit me hard anyway.
can't really explain why becasue I don't really know but the theme and the twist was potentially life threatening. I couldn't read it again it might make my heart stop.
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its comments like this that make me know its worthwhile to keep writing.
thank you, from the bottom of my heart (wherever it may be) -
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lol at the bottom perhaps?
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lmao!
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trying
to
catch
her
breath
as
it
resumed
running
after
her <-- i ike the format and how it is made to look like she really is breathless
and the ending heartbreaking beauty
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hehe thankies ^_^
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made me cry babe...
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my poetry is fiction hon ^_^ take a look at the picture you'll see what i mean.
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I can not tell you enough how much I love this! Wow...Bravo! Thank you for the entry.
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thank you ^_^
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