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Controling

You say you love,
You say you need me,
What you don't know,
Is your pushing me away,

Yes I love you,
Yes I want to be with you,
But saying I can't have friends,
That is to much for me,

I'm getting pissed,
I'm just about done,
You say you love me,
But you don't show it,

You want to control me,
I want to be free,
We fight all the time,
I'm going to walk away.....

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  • the russian
    August 2
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    loved ur last stanza... very understanding, very real, keep it up gary! on the cheek


  • Shutupnread
    July 31
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    Honest..

    Good job. I'm glad you brought the other side of you out in this. You did very well. :]

  • eminemdragons
    July 14
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    wow

    this is a really great poem but wow. i know that you were describing a relationship that is not good but this really hit me hard because it really reminded me of me and my fathers relationship. especially the last line i'm going to walk away...i did. but anyways, great poem! very well written!


  • StillLovingYou
    July 14
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    awwww who is this about?? it is really a good poem! great job!