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Publisher's Clearing House

Last night, I had a dream
where I just said screw it,
hopped on a plane,
and proved to myself that you exist
in real life.

I reached out
and touched you
and you touched back.

And that's when they walked in
with the cameras
the balloons
and the check.

I started crying,
hand over my mouth,
and wondered why
they couldn't just leave me alone
and let me be happy.

Author notes

I love that when describing a dream, we say "a dream where..." as if dreams are places.

Based on a real dream I had this morning.

In my head, I think you live in a yellow house, but in the dream, it was dark blue with white trim.

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  • Yemassee gold member
    October 12

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    If they walk in with a check, I'll let them interrupt an obviously important moment because with that money, I could make that dream then come true.

    But yes, even in the dream, you found it difficult to connect...I understand that, I'm pretty sure I do...I'm living it now actually...though I know the color of her house.


  • Pure Thought silver member
    July 14

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    Sadly humorous, and I understand the sentiment.
    I enjoyed this poem.

    Buddy

    P.S. it is yellow... lol