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The Kittens

I'm up in Claremont
High above the seven colleges
I could not get into
Trying to get home
and there are so many friends:
Cry baby Craigo
A sea of ladies,
and everyone I've hurt
The truck is stuck,
but easily pushed around by foot,
and the rocks are the most
detailed ever,
There are donuts
No fucking shit
The kittens are under the house again,
and one has paint all over its ass
I want to clean him,
but he's too fast

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  • luvdrkchocolate
    July 19

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    I don't get a lot of what you're alluding to in this. But it does have a nice rythmn and sounds good. I thought the best part was about the kittens but I like animals so that's probably why.