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Bullet for My Fiancé (Wedding Day Suicide)

His promises
Lingered in the air
Valentines Day changed her forever
The clue was in his hesitation
His lying through empty eyes
The blood stained her wedding dress
The roses began to die
And as the Southern Cross never appeared
…Her tears dried on the vale.

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Just a little something i thought would be different

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  • XxShOoTiNgStArxX
    July 17

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    Damn girl, this ís a good write!! Different yes,but aren't thËy all when we each write our own!! :-) ur such an amazing girl!! îve always thought highly of u!! Keep ur head up!!
    *Kelsi*