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Ana's Dance

This suicide dance, Ana
Don’t forgive her for her pain
Don’t wash away her sin
Commit her
Mother of anti-depressants
A quick fix for a deep sickness of the mind
Don’t let her dance
Evaluate her envious image
As she writes perfection all over her body
Take away her abilities
Shade her from diets of suffocation
Exhaust her
For her thoughts aren’t exhausting enough
And every time she looks a her reflection
In reminds her of the starvation
And the memory of euphoria in hunger

Author notes

About having an eating disorder

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  • darkscorpia
    September 28
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    This is really good.


  • redhanded
    September 6

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    oh wow powerful piece! I can relate alot and I enjoyed this write very much. best of luck to you!
    andi
    (redhanded)